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General Palace Discussion General Palace talk - please keep transfer talk in the transfer forum. |
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If I may offer some critique I hope you will accept it positively
Overall it was a very solid article and a very good start so that it's a great basis to work from. As a journalist it would read better without your personal commentary concerning your view on events - try and keep it impersonal unless your editor has instructed you to approach matters this way. Always try to find a slightly off beat angle to approach the issue. Perhaps your commentary about incoming players and the cost could have compared with prices overall and the issue of Palace working within close budgets. This coming week you have the Zaha story and the human side of his being close to family and at a club where he is loved - the prodigal returns Good luck with your new venture
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Well said! But wait for the first arsey comment about brown nosing to the board. A lot of Palace fans are still very grateful we have a club to support.
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Here's my latest rant and rave about the club. This week I am addressing whether a new centre forward is the answer and whether Warnock should start using our 'away' formation to stop the rot at home.
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I'm delighted with the appointment of Alan Pardew, but it isn't a guarantee of survival.
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Good balanced article
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Top work Ryan!
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Like it
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Nice one
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Thanks a lot guys!
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